Annotation Tuesday! Sebastian Junger and the perfect storm

“The Storm”

"They that go down to the sea in ships...see the deeds of the Lord. They reel and stagger like drunken men, they are at their wits' end." -Psalm 107

GLOUCESTER, MASSACHUSETTS, IS A TOUGH TOWN OF 28,000 PEOPLE, squeezed between a rocky coast and a huge tract of scrub pine and boulders called Dogtown Common. Local widows used to live in Dogtown, along with the forgotten and the homeless, while the rest of the community spread out along the shore. Today, a third of all jobs in Gloucester are fishing related, and the waterfront bars-the Crow's Nest, the Mariners Pub, the Old Timer's Tavern-are dark little places that are unmistakably not for tourists.

One street up from the coastline is Main Street, where the bars tend to have windows and even waitresses, and then there is a rise called Portugee Hill. Halfway up Portugee Hill is Our Lady of Good Voyage Church, a large stucco construction with two bell towers and a statue of the Virgin Mary, who is looking down with love and concern at the bundle in her arms. The bundle is a Gloucester fishing schooner.It’s a lovely opening, the way you inform the reader of Gloucester’s population size, geography, economy — and then, in the last sentence, bring it around to the focal point of the story. What prompted you to begin this way?I felt like I had to get into the place quickly and efficiently. I really like beginning stories by imagining them as the beginning of a movie. In the opening scene of a movie about Gloucester, what would the tracking shot be? Where would it come to rest? I think visually when I write. The sculpture on that church is really arresting and I thought, "I think I would pan across Gloucester and stop on that image." I should say, having a Gloucester schooner instead of the Baby Jesus in Mary’s arms is such a stunningly pagan move that, as an atheist and an anthropologist, I was just charmed by it. Also, it communicates how frightening this job must have been, that they visualized the help they needed in that way.

SEPTEMBER 18, 1991, WAS A HOT DAY IN GLOUCESTER, TOURISTS shuffling down Main Street and sunbathers still crowding the wide expanses of Good Harbor Beach. Day boats bobbed offshore in the heat shimmer, and swells sneaked languorously up against Bass Rocks.Where did you get this information? It feels like you were there.I lived in Gloucester for years. Honestly, I can’t remember if I was there on Sept. 18 or not. I knew what the weather was, obviously, so I was drawing the rest from experience.

At Gloucester Marine Railways, a haul-out place at the end of a short peninsula, Adam Randall stood contemplating a boat named the Andrea Gail. He had come all the way from Florida to go swordfishing on the boat, and now he stood considering her uneasily. The Andrea Gail was a 70-foot longliner that was leaving for Canada's Grand Banks within days. He had a place on board if he wanted it. "I just had bad vibes," he would say later. Without quite knowing why, he turned and walked away. How did you hear about Randall?I can’t remember how I heard about him initially. I learned about him from his girlfriend, who I interviewed, and I found out about her from one of the girlfriends of the crew — probably Bobby Shatford’s girlfriend, Christina.Once you’ve reached the story’s end, this sentence becomes excruciating.I’m not sure I did that consciously and on purpose. There are a lot of instinctive moves in writing, so it’s very possible I didn’t consciously say, "Oh, this would be great if I began and ended with him." But your unconscious mind works in really interesting ways. I’m sure it’s the same with musicians. When people improvise in music, I’m sure they do it in ways their conscious mind can’t keep up with, but you can parse it later and see they were thinking in a really organized way.

Longliners are steel-hulled fishing boats that gross as much as $1 million in a year. Up to half of that can be profit. Swordfish range up and down the coast from Puerto Rico to Newfoundland, and the longliners trail after them all year like seagulls behind a day trawler. The fish are caught with monofilament lines 40 miles long and set with a thousand hooks. For the crew, it's less a job than a four-week jag. They're up at four, work all day, and don't get to bed until midnight. The trip home takes a week, which is the part of the month when swordfishermen sleep. When they get to port the owner hands each of them several thousand dollars. A certain amount of drinking goes on, and then a week later they return to the boat, load up, and head back out.Here and elsewhere you really capture the life of a fisherman. How much time did you spend with them?I didn’t go out on longliners, because they go out for four to six weeks. There are insurance issues. So I went out on other longline boats that were day boats. I didn’t spend a lot of time. Mostly I just interviewed fishermen. Some of the stuff in this paragraph would have come from Bob Brown. He was very generous with his time, particularly about the  Andrea Gail, and not defensive at all.

"Swordfishing is a young man's game, a single man's game," says the mother of one who died at it. "There aren't a lot of Boy Scouts in the business," another woman says.

Sword boats come from all over the East Coast-Florida, the Carolinas, New Jersey. Gloucester, which is located near the tip of Cape Ann, a 45-minute drive northeast from Boston, is a particularly busy port because it juts so far out toward the summer fishing grounds. Boats load up with fuel, bait, ice, and food and head out to the Grand Banks, about 90 miles southeast of Newfoundland, where warm Gulf Stream water mixes with the cold Labrador current in an area shallow enough-"shoal" enough, as fishermen say-to be a perfect feeding ground for fish. The North Atlantic weather is so violent, though, that in the early days entire fleets would go down at one time, a hundred men lost overnight. Even today, with loran navigation, seven-day forecasts, and satellite tracking, fishermen on the Grand Banks are just rolling the dice come the fall storm season. But swordfish sells for around $6 a pound, and depending on the size of the boat a good run might take in 30,000 to 40,000 pounds. Deckhands are paid shares based on the catch and can earn $10,000 in a month. So the tendency among fishermen in early fall is to keep the dice rolling.

The Andrea Gail was one of maybe a dozen big commercial boats gearing up in Gloucester in mid-September 1991. She was owned by Bob Brown, a longtime fisherman who was known locally as Suicide Brown because of the risks he'd taken as a young man. He owned a second longliner, the Hannah Boden, and a couple of lobster boats. The Andrea Gail and the Hannah Boden were Brown's biggest investments, collectively worth well over a million dollars.

The Andrea Gail, in the language, was a raked-stem, hard-chined, western-rig boat. That meant that her bow had a lot of angle to it, she had a nearly square cross-section, and her pilothouse was up front rather than in the stern. She was built of welded steel plate, rust-red below waterline, green above, and she had a white wheelhouse with half-inch-thick safety glass windows.How do you decide the degree to which you laymanize terms? I mean, I understand maybe half of this. Does it depend on the publication?You know, sometimes I just like the sound of the language. I like the fact that you could be on a boat — or with soldiers, for that matter — and guys would say things you didn’t understand. And that was part of the experience of being there. You know, if a reader wants to look that up, he can. But it doesn’t really matter for the story what rake-stem means — and right now I can’t remember what the hell it means — but that’s not a detail that has any effect on the story itself. In this case, it’s more of an artifact, more atmospheric. If this particular quality to her hull design had an effect on her sinking, I would explain what it is. But I just wanted people to taste the language of that world, and I didn’t feel they always needed to know exactly what it all meant. Fully rigged, for a long trip, she carried hundreds of miles of monofilament line, thousands of hooks, and 10,000 pounds of baitfish. There were seven life preservers on board, six survival suits, an emergency position indicating radio beacon, and one life raft.These are great, specific detail — where did you find them? And what sort of documentation did you use as sourcing? Some of this information came from the insurance adjuster, who evaluates boats and recommends changes for safety. He inspected the Andrea Gail.

The Andrea Gail was captained by a local named Frank "Billy" Tyne, a former carpenter and drug counselor who had switched to fishing at age 27. Tyne had a reputation as a fearless captain, and in his ten years of professional fishing he had made it through several treacherous storms. He had returned from a recent trip with almost 40,000 pounds of swordfish in his hold, close to a quarter of a million dollars' worth. Jobs aboard Tyne's boat were sought after. So it seemed odd, on September 18, when Adam Randall walked back up the dock at Gloucester Marine Railways and returned to town.

Randall's replacement was 28-year-old David Sullivan, who was mildly famous in town for having saved the lives of his entire crew one bitter January night two years before.I love the use of ‘mildly’. Was this meant to suggest that a) Gloucester residents are a tough crowd and b) that heroics were not unprecedented?It’s a tough town and there are a lot of guys like that. Every guy on those boats has done something pretty outrageous, at one point or another. What Sully did was just a bit more outrageous. Unconsciously, probably, I was trying to communicate that. If Sully were from Edgartown or something, he would be locally famous. But in Gloucester, it’s like okay. It happens every once in a while and it might get you a couple of free drinks. When his boat, the Harmony, had unexpectedly begun taking on water, Sullivan had pulled himself across a rope to a sister ship 'and got help just in time to rescue his sinking crew. Along with Sullivan were a young West Indian named Alfred Pierre; 30-year-old Bobby Shatford, whose mother, Ethel, tended bar at the Crow's Nest on Main Street; and two men from Bradenton Beach, Florida—Dale Murphy, 30, and Michael "Bugsy" Moran, 36.I like that we don’t get into a bunch of individual back stories here — we cut straight to the boat setting sail, then back up for the wide-angle view. Why did you do this? And why was it important to specify the age of each man?Generally, what I try to put into a story — particularly if there’s a word count — is the information the reader needs to know in order to understand the outcome; the descriptive passages they need in order to feel like they’re there; and just enough about all the people involved so you can identify them and understand why they make the choices they do. Readers just aren’t that interested in people’s biographies. They don’t really care that much what town they grew up in. You know, I spent a lot of time with American soldiers, and the standard news reporting — if you’re talking to a soldier and quoting him — is to say where he’s from and whether he likes the Red Sox. People just don’t give a shit. I really try to avoid the details that seem kind of perfunctory, not necessary, and ultimately not that interesting.

On September 20, Billy Tyne and his crew passed Ten Pound Island, rounded Dogbar Breakwater, and headed northeast on a dead-calm sea.

FOR SEVERAL GENERATIONS AFTER THE FIRST BRITISH settlers arrived in Gloucester, the main industries on Cape Ann were farming and logging. Then around 1700 the cod market took off, and Gloucester schooners began making runs up to the Grand Banks two or three times a year. French and Basque fishermen had already been working the area from Europe since 1510, perhaps earlier. They could fill their holds faster by crossing the Atlantic and fishing the rich waters of the Banks than by plying their own shores.The sense of history here and the Biblical epigraph give this story a certain timelessness. The fact that fishermen will always be at the sea’s mercy, no matter the technology, reinforces this. How do you develop a story’s themes? Do you see them immediately or work your way into them?You don’t want to start with history, because everyone’s eyes glaze over. But in Gloucester, people have a very strong sense of the town’s fishing heritage. Personally, I think it’s amazing that Basque fishermen were crossing the Atlantic. Everything that people do, people have been doing for a really long time. And I think the public forgets that, and I’d kind of like to remind them of it. It’s personally pleasing to me to do that.

The Gloucester codfishermen worked from dories and returned to the schooners each night. Payment was reckoned by cutting the tongues out of the codThis is killer detail — where’d you get this?I went to the Gloucester library and took out all their books on fishing. I’d go through them and mark the details that stuck out. Sometimes one detail can represent pages of history — you know, just sums it up. Basically, if it’s something that makes me laugh, makes me think, or makes me wonder, then it goes in. If this is lighting me up intellectually, then it goes in.How do you maintain the edge in your work?I try to edit my work in different states of mind. So I’ll go running on a really hot day and then read the 2,000 words I just wrote. Or if I’m upset, or really sleepy, or if I’m drunk, I’ll read this stuff. If you’re sleepy and you find yourself skipping over a paragraph because you’re bored by it and just want to get to the interesting part, it comes out. Those different states of mind are a really interesting filter. and adding them up at the end of the trip. When fog rolled in, the dories would drift out of earshot and were often never heard from again. Occasionally, weeks later, a two-man dory crew might be picked up by a schooner bound for, say, Pernambuco or Liverpool. The fishermen would make it back to Gloucester several months later, walking up Main Street as if returning from the dead.

The other danger, of course, was storms. Like a war, a big storm might take out all the young men of a single town. In 1862, for example, a winter gale struck 70 schooners fishing the dangerous waters of Georges Bank, east of Cape Cod. The ships tried to ride out 50-foot seas at anchor. By morning 15 Gloucester boats had gone down with 125 men. At least 4,000 Gloucestermen have been lost at sea, but some estimates run closer to 10,000.Any idea what accounts for the disparity? Gloucester is not a big town.I think that figure is either fishermen on vessels out of other ports — plenty of those guys were fishing out of New Bedford — or people from other ports fishing on Gloucester ships.Are 200-year-old records unreliable?I think the records are pretty good at 4,000 and mythological at 10,000. But that’s also part of the town’s idea of itself. I mean, I don’t know where I got that number — from a book, probably? Even if that’s not a realistic number, it’s interesting that the town thinks that it might be. On some level, as a writer, I kind of feel like, who am I to say? I don’t know, and I’m certainly not going to spend three years trying to figure it out. Just report what they think. A bronze sculpture on the waterfront commemorates them: THEY THAT GO DOWN TO THE SEA IN SHIPS 1623-1923. It shows a schooner captain fighting heavy weather, his face framed by a sou'wester hat.

In the early days, a lot of superstition went into seafaring. Occasionally men stepped off of ill-fated boats on a hunch. Captains refused to set sail on Fridays, since that was the day their Lord had been crucified. Boats often had lucky silver coins affixed to the base of their masts, and crew members took care never to tear up a printed page because they never knew-most of them being illiterate-whether it was from the Bible.

THE Andrea Gail TOOK NEARLY A WEEK TO REACH THE FISHING grounds. The six crewmen watched television, cooked and ate, slept, prepared the fishing gear, talked women, talked money, talked horse racing, talked fish, stared at the sea.How do you report this? You do not hedge these details with “would have” or “might have.”These are such general and universal activities on a fishing boat. Everyone you talk to, when asked how they passed the time, would all basically say the same thing. And, again, these are also things that have no consequence in terms of what happened in the story. They were so probable, so general, that I could just make an assertion. Which is very different from saying the Andrea Gail capsized. I can’t know that. But can you imagine me saying they “might have” talked about women? Like, of course they fucking talked about women. “Might have” would have sounded self-aware and trite. I’m trying to be very scrupulous and honest with the reader about what can be known and not known but also not make the reading experience too awkward. Swordfishermen seldom eat swordfish when they're out. Like many ocean fish, it's often full of sea worms, four feet long and thick as pencilsSuch a wonderful, vivid analogy. Were you able to see a sea worm in the flesh?No. I got that detail from the fishermen., and though the worms are removed prior to market, many of the men who catch swordfish consider it fit only for the landlubbing public. At sea a fisherman will eat steak, spaghetti, chicken, ice cream, anything he wants. On ice in the Andrea Gail's hold was $3,000 worth of groceries.Do you remember where you got these details?That’s just general information I learned from talking to these guys. The $3,000 figure was probably from Bob Brown.

The boat arrived at the Grand Banks around September 26 and started fishing immediately. On the main deck was a huge spool of 600-pound-test monofilament, the mainline, which passed across a bait table and paid out off the stern. Baiters alternate at the mainline like oldtime axmen on a Douglas fir. They are expected to bait a hook with squid or mackerel every 15 seconds; at this rate it takes two men four hours to set 40 miles of line. After they are done they shower and retire to their bunks. Around four in the morning the crew gets up and starts hauling the line. A hydraulic drum on the wheelhouse deck slowly pulls it in, and the crew unclips the leaders as they come. When there's a fish at the end of a leader, deckhands catch it with steel gaffs and drag it, struggling, aboard. They saw the sword off, gut and behead the fish with a knife, and drop it into the hold.

The crew has dinner in midafternoon, baits the line again, and sets it back out. They might then have a couple of beers and go to bed.You dispensed with the day-to-day activities of the fishermen in two paragraphs. That’s incredible economy.It might have originally been longer, but then I had a few drinks and read it. … You know, many of the writers that I admire are really economical with their prose. Like John McPhee; I grew up reading him, and that was definitely the style I wanted to have as I learned to be a writer.

The Andrea Gail had been out 38 days when the National Weather Service suddenly started issuing fax bulletins about a low-pressure system that was building over southern Quebec and heading out to sea: "DEVELOPING STORM 45N 73W MOVING E 24 KTS. WINDS INCREASING TO 35 KTS AND SEAS BUILDING TO 16 FT."This is great specificity of detail that also shows us process and industry lingo; what was your source?That would’ve been from the advisories. All that stuff — particularly if there’s an investigation — is on record. Meanwhile, the Weather Service was keeping a close eye on the mid-Atlantic, where Hurricane Grace, which had developed in the vicinity of Bermuda two days before, was now tracking steadily northwest toward the Carolina coast.

It was Sunday, October 27, very late to be pushing one's luck on the Grand Banks. Most of the fleet was well to the east of Tyne, out on the high seas, but a 150-foot Japanese swordboat named the Eishan Maru and the 77-foot Mary T were fishing nearby. Tyne told Albert Johnston, the Mary T's captain, that he had 40,000 pounds of fish in his hold-an impressive catch-and now he was heading home.Was there a recording of this conversation or was this based on the recollection of Johnston?I interviewed someone on the Eishan Maru and Albert Johnston on the Mary T. Johnston would’ve told me what Tyne told him about the fish in his hold.

The question was, could he make it through the Canadian storm that was rapidly coming his way? He would have to cross some very dangerous water while passing Sable Island, a remote spit 120 miles southeast of Nova Scotia, whose shoals are known to fishermen as the Graveyard of the Atlantic. That night Linda Greenlaw, the captain of Bob Brown's other longliner, the Hannah Boden, radioed in and asked Tyne if he'd received the weather chart. "Oh, yeah, I got it," Tyne replied. "Looks like it's gonna be wicked."I assume, because this is in quotes, there was either a recording or you spoke to Greenlaw?There’s no recording of that. The quotes may have been a copyediting decision by the magazine. They set some channels to relay information to Bob Brown and decided to talk the following night.

Though Billy Tyne had no way of knowing it, the heavy weather that was now brewing in the North Atlantic was an anomaly of historic proportions. Three years later, professional meteorologists still talk animatedly about the storm of '91, debating how it formed and exactly what role Hurricane Grace played in it all. Generally, hurricanes this late in the season are anemic events that quickly dissipate over land. Hurricane Grace, though, never made it to shore; a massive cold front, called an anticyclone, was blocking the entire eastern seaboard. Well off the Carolinas, Grace ran up against the cold front and literally bounced off. She veered back out to sea and, though weakened, churned northeast along the warm Gulf Stream waters.Did you speak to a meteorologist? How did you educate yourself about weather systems?I talked to a meteorologist named Bob Case. He was actually the guy who, in his frustration to explain to me why the storm was so bad, said, “Look, it was like a perfect storm.” I also pored over a lot of meteorological information on the storm and read books on the weather.

At the same time, the low-pressure system that had developed over Quebec and moved eastward off the Canadian Maritimes was beginning to behave strangely. Normally, low-pressure systems in the region follow the jet stream offshore and peter out in the North Atlantic, the usual pattern of the well-known nor'easter storms. But this system did the opposite: On Monday, October 28, it unexpectedly stalled off the coast of Nova Scotia and began to grow rapidly, producing record high seas and gale-force winds. Then it spun around and headed back west, directly at New England, a reversal known as a retrograde.The use of “strangely” and “unexpectedly” makes this otherwise mundane description awfully frightening.I was trying to inject a bit of foreboding.

Meteorologists still disagree on what caused the storm to grow so suddenly and then to retrograde. But the best theory offered by the National Weather Service and its Canadian equivalent, Environment Canada, is that it was caught between the counter-clockwise spin of the dying hurricane and the clockwise swirl of the anticyclone, creating a funnel effect that forced it toward the coast at speeds of up to ten knots. The farther west it tracked, the more it absorbed moisture and energy from the remnants of Hurricane Grace-and the more ferocious it became.

The technical name for the new storm was a "midlatitude cyclone." The people in its path, however, would later call it the No Name Hurricane, since it had all the force of a hurricane, but was never officially designated as one. And because the brunt of the storm would strike the eastern seaboard around October 31, it would also acquire another name: the Halloween Gale.Your section kickers are terrific – you ratchet up the tension every time. How much attention do you pay to structure? How do you go about structuring a piece?I cut the original draft in half because 50 pages was too long. After that, it didn’t get changed very much. Generally, in my books and articles, most of the work is copyediting and fact checking. Whatever you’re reading, it’s probably the result of me making conscious or unconscious decisions. There’s undoubtedly some rhythm and structure in here that’s me trying to emulate John McPhee. He does that kind of thing a lot — those last sentences that drive home a point and leave you thinking.Do you still find that McPhee is an influence on your work?Oh, yeah. I think I incorporated his rhythms and sensibility very deeply in the way I write. I’m sure there was a writer of some previous generation that he did that with. That kind of stuff just gets passed on.

AROUND 6 P.M. ON MONDAY, October 28, Tyne told the skipper of a Gloucester boat named the Allison that he was 130 miles north-northeast of Sable Island and experiencing 80-knot winds. "She's comin' on, boys, and she's comin' on strong," he said. According to Tyne, the conditions had gone from flat calm to 50 knots almost without warning. The rest of the fleet was farther east and in relative safety, but the Andrea Gail was all alone in the path of the fast-developing storm. She was probably running with the waves and slightly angled toward them--"quartering down-sea," as it's called--which is a stable position for a boat; she'll neither plow her nose into the sea nor roll over broadside. A wave must be bigger than a boat to flip her end-over-end, and the Andrea Gail was 70 feet long. But by this point, data buoys off Nova Scotia were measuring waves as high as 100 feet--among the highest readings ever recorded. Near Sable Island the troughs of such monsters would have reached the ocean floor.

Tyne would have radioed for help if trouble had come on slowly--a leak or a gradual foundering, for example.This is a horrifying sentence, and smart; informed conjecture based on what did not occur. Did you have to do a lot of that during the reporting process?I talked to a lot of people about this, including fishermen and Bob Brown. At number of them said some variation of, “Whatever happened, happened quick.” Because the first thing you do if you get into trouble is radio the Coast Guard. So it’s conjecture, but it’s conjecture guided by other people’s expertise.Did you have to do this often, to reconstruct events based on negatives?In this kind of story, where you can’t ultimately know what happened in detail, you can get fairly close just by logically figuring things out. For example, if they were in trouble, they would have gotten on the radio. "Whatever happened, happened quick," a former crew member from the Hannah Boden later said. Tyne didn't even have time to grab the radio and shout.

WAVES OF UNIMAGINABLE PROPORTIONS HAVE BEEN RECORDED over the years. When Sir Ernest Shackleton skippered an open sailboat off the South Georgian Islands in May 1916, he saw a wave so big that he mistook the foaming crest for a break in the clouds. "It's clearing, boys!" he yelled to his crew, and then, moments later: "For God's sake, hold on, it's got us!" By some miracle they managed to survive. In 1933 in the South Pacific an officer on the USS Ramapo looked to stern and saw a wave that was later calculated to be 112 feet high. In 1984 a three-masted schooner named the Marques was struck by a single wave that sent her down in less than a minute, taking 19 people with her. Nine survived, including a strapping young Virginian who managed to force his way up through a rising column of water and out an open hatch.That you jumped from 1933 to 1984, suggesting that rogue waves (my grandfather saw one during World War II, when he was in the Coast Guard) are a rarity, simply increases the tension. Was that your intent?You know, I had a dozen accounts of rogue waves, and you can’t list a dozen examples in an article if you want people to read it. The Shackleton story is famous, but the USS Ramapo story is not. There’s just something about it that struck me. Three good examples is, in some ways, as good as 12. The point is, there are huge waves, they are scary, and they sink ships.

Oceanographers call these "extreme waves" or "rogues." Old-time Maine fishermen call them "queer ones." They have roared down the stacks of navy destroyers, torn the bows off container ships, and broken cargo vessels in two.

When the rogue hit the Andrea Gail, sometime between midnight and dawn on October 29, Tyne would probably have been alone in the wheelhouse and already exhausted after 24 hours at the helm. Captains, unwilling to relinquish the wheel to inexperienced crew, have been known to drive for two or even three days straight. The crew would have been below deck, either in the kitchen or in their staterooms. Once in a while one of the men would have come up to keep Tyne company. In the privacy of the wheelhouse he might have admitted his fears: This is bad, this is the worst I've ever seen. There's no way we could inflate a life raft in these conditions. If a hatch breaks open, if anything lets go...Was this speculation — that Tyne might’ve been so open about his concerns — based on interviews with his family and friends? Or is that typical of captains in his position?That would have come from other fishermen and Bob Brown. All of these guys would have been in situations like this, except they survived them. It reflects a common reaction to that situation, rather than something particular of Tyne.

Tyne must have looked back and seen an exceptionally big wave rising up behind him. It would have been at least 70 feet high, maybe 100 feet. The stern of the boat would have risen up sickeningly and hurled the men from their bunks. The Andrea Gail would have flipped end-over-end and landed hull-up, exploding the wheelhouse windows. Tyne, upside-down in his steel cage, would have drowned without a word. The five men below deck would have landed on the ceiling. The ones who remained conscious would have known that it was impossible to escape through an open hatch and swim out from under the boat. And even if they could-what then? How would they have found their survival suits, the life raft?This is an exceptional paragraph. There’s a different horror in each sentence. How were you able to (speculatively) reconstruct this?This, too, would have come from guys who had been in those situations and survived them.Did you talk to anyone who’d seen a rogue wave?Yeah, Albert Johnston. But anyone who has been out fishing for years has seen a rogue wave. It can be a 15-foot wave on a flat, calm sea, or it can be a 50-foot wave when the seas are at 20 feet.

The Andrea Gail would have rolled drunkenly and started to fill. Water would have sprayed through bursting gaskets and risen in a column from the wheelhouse stairway. It would have reached the men in their staterooms and it would have been cold enough to take their breath away. At least the end would have come fast.

IT WASN'T UNTIL TUESDAY AFTERNOON THAT THE BOATS ON THE Grand Banks were able to check in with one another. The Eishan Marti, which was closest to Billy Tyne's last known location, reported that she was completely rolled by one huge wave; her wheelhouse windows were blown out, and she was left without rudder or electronics. The Lori Dawn Eight had taken so much water down her vents that she lost an engine and headed in. The Mary T had fared well but had already taken $165,000 worth of fish in nine days, so she headed in, too. The Hannah Boden, the Allison, the Mr. Simon, and the Miss Millie were way to the east and "had beautiful weather," in Albert Johnston's words. That left the Andrea Gail.

By Wednesday, October 30, the storm had retrograded so far to the west that conditions at sea were almost tolerable. At that point the worst of it was just hitting Gloucester. The Eastern Point neighborhood, where the town's well-to-do live, had been cut in half.This is the second time, I think, that you describe a bisection; earlier you mention that rogues have “torn the bows off container ships, and broken cargo vessels in two.”That would have been completely unconscious or coincidence. I was totally unaware of that. Waves were rolling right through the woods and into some of the nicest living rooms in the state. On the Back Shore, 30-foot waves were tearing the facades off houses and claiming whole sections of Ocean Drive. The wind, whipping through the power lines, was hitting pitches that no one had ever heard before. Just up the coast in Kennebunkport, some Democrats were cheered to see boulders in the family room of President George Bush's summer mansion.This is such a singular, startling section. For the first time, you pull back, away from fishing. What was the narrative purpose?You want to play with distance when you’re creating a narrative. If you get to a point of tragedy, drama and tension, and then you cut it off and go somewhere else, that’s how you get them to keep reading. All writing is manipulative because people have a lot of other things they could be doing. Also, this was a big storm. I wanted to communicate that it affected 500 miles of coastline. To do that, you have to pull back and show the sweep of things.

"The only light I can shed on the severity of the storm is that until then, we had never-ever had a lobster trap move offshore," said Bob Brown. "Some were moved 13 miles to the west. It was the worst storm I have ever heard of, or experienced."Why did you wait until deep into the story to bring in Brown’s voice? It’s quite unexpected!The dramatic stuff was happening on the boat. I wasn’t sure people wanted to hear from him up top.

By now the storm had engulfed nearly the entire eastern seaboard. Even in protected Boston Harbor, a data buoy measured wave heights of 30 feet. A Delta Airlines pilot at Boston's Logan Airport was surprised to see spray topping 200-foot construction cranes on Deer Island. Sitting on the runway waiting for clearance, his air speed indicator read 80 miles per hour. Off Cape Cod, a sloop named the Satori lost its life raft, radios, and engine. The three people in its crew had resigned themselves to writing good-bye notes when they were finally rescued 200 miles south of Nantucket by a Coast Guard swimmer who jumped, untethered, from a helicopter into the roiling waves. An Air National Guard helicopter ran out of fuel off Long Island, and its crew had to jump one at a time through the darkness into the sea. One man was killed and the other four were rescued after drifting throughout the night. All along the coast, waves and storm surge combined to act as "dams" that prevented rivers from flowing into the sea. The Hudson backed up 100 miles to Albany and caused flooding, so did the Potomac.

Brown tried in vain all day Wednesday to radio Tyne. That evening he finally got through to Linda Greenlaw, who said she'd last heard Billy Tyne talking to other boats on the radio Monday night. "Those men sounded scared, and we were scared for them," she said later. Later that night Brown finally alerted the U.S. Coast Guard.Why “finally”? Did you believe Brown dragged his feet?"Finally" would have come from other fisherman — it wouldn’t have been my opinion. I don’t feel qualified to make a judgment like that, because I’m not a fisherman. But Bob Brown didn’t call the Coast Guard immediately. When he called them, he finally called them. But he never got a distress call, and you can’t keep calling the Coast Guard because you’re worried. They’re busy. You need something concrete. If the guys just sound scared the Coast Guard doesn’t want to hear it.

"When were they due in?" the dispatcher asked.

"Next Saturday," Brown replied.

The dispatcher refused to initiate a search because the boat wasn't overdue yet. Brown then got the Canadian Coast Guard on the line. "I'm afraid my boat's in trouble, and I fear the worst," he told the dispatcher in Halifax. At dawn Canadian reconnaissance planes, which were already in the area, began sweeping for the Andrea Gail.

Two days later, a U.S. Coast Guard cutter and five aircraft were also on the case. But there was no clue about the missing boat until November 5, when the Coast Guard positively identified the Andrea Gail's radio beacon and propane tank, which had washed up on Sable Island.

"The recovered debris is loose gear and could have washed overboard during heavy weather," said Petty Officer Elizabeth Brannan. "No debris has been located that indicates the Andrea Gail has been sunk."

The search had covered more than 65,000 square miles at that point. In heavy seas it's hard for a pilot to be sure he is seeing everything-one Coast Guard pilot reported spotting a 500-foot ship that he had completely missed on a previous flight-so no one was leaping to any conclusions. Two days and 35,000 square miles later, though, it was hard not to assume the worst: Now the Andrea Gail's emergency position-indicating radio beacon had been found. It, too, had washed up on the beaches of Sable Island.Your narrative is basically one of attrition. At the beginning we have a full ship and lively men. Now all that’s left is debris.That’s what I wanted to the reader to feel. In the end, it’s just some debris on a beach.

An EPIRB is a device about the size of a bowling pin that automatically emits a radio signal if it floats free of its shipboard holster. The signal travels via satellite to onshore listening posts, where Coast Guard operators decode the name of the boat and her location to within two miles. EPIRBs have been required equipment for fishing vessels on the high seas since 1990. The only catch is that the device must be turned on, something captains do automatically when they leave port. ("It's not the sort of thing you forget," says one captain.) Though Bob Brown insists that the Andrea Gail's EPIRB had been turned on when it left port, it was found on Sable Island disarmed.

The Coast Guard called off the search on November 8, 11 days after the Andrea Gail had presumably gone down. Search planes had covered 116,000 square miles of ocean. "After taking into account the water temperature and other factors, we felt the probability of survival was minimal," Coast Guard Lieutenant Brian Krenzien told reporters at the time. The water temperature was 46 degrees. When a man falls overboard on the Grand Banks that late in the year, there usually isn't even time to turn the boat around.Do you remember the source of this fact? It’s interesting to use as a metric the likelihood one could survive a topple overboard.Of course, I would never dare have said this based on my own experience, because I don’t have any. I’m sure it came from one of the fishermen I talked to.

"I FINALLY GAVE UP HOPE AFTER THE COAST Guard called the search off," says Ethel Shatford, Bobby Shatford's mother, at the Crow's Nest. "It was very hard, though. You always read stories about people being found floating around in boats. The memorial was on November 16. There were more than a thousand people. This bar and the bar next door were closed, and we had enough food for everyone for three days. Recently we had a service for a New Bedford boat that went down last winter. None of the crew was from here, but they were fishermen."Was Ms. Shatford, as well as the rest of the story’s principals, eager to talk to you?Well, they weren’t eager. Some couldn’t be convinced, so they didn’t wind up in the article or book. Ethel was really nice. She was cautious, at first, but I spent a lot of time with her. She tended bar; she was a perfect person to stalk. I’d just go have a beer and talk to her. We kind of got to know each other. I got the feeling that people were sniffing around me to see if I was okay.But you’d lived there!Yeah, but I didn’t know any of those people. There were 28,000 people in the town and these weren’t bars I normally hung out in.

The Crow's Nest is a low, dark room with wood-veneer paneling and a horseshoe bar where regulars pour their own drinks.This is a marvelous detail; it shows that you spent quite some time there.Often I’d stay in a room upstairs. On the wall below the television is a photo of Bobby Shatford and another of the Andrea Gail, as well as a plaque for the six men who died. Upstairs there are cheap guest rooms where deckhands often stay.

Ethel Shatford is a strong, gray-faced Gloucester native in her late fifties. Three of her own sons have fished, and over the years she has served as den mother to scores of young fishermen on the Gloucester waterfront. Four of the six men who died on the Andrea Gail spent their last night on shore in the rooms of the Crow's Nest.Most of the story is in the past tense. Here you shift into present tense. Why?Because at this point, Ethel still existed. She’s died since, but my description of her is present tense because she was present tense. I wanted to give the sense that I was in the bar, talking to her. You know, I’ve told you the story of the Andrea Gail — now fast-forward a couple of years. I like showing the mechanisms of journalism, so you can see the pulleys and gears of how a story gets constructed. It feels trustworthy. The reader gets a sense of where the story came from. But also, this is to convey that these are real people. They’re not figures in a story that happened two years ago. These are real people, and you can go to this bar, sit down on a bar stool, and there’s Ethel Shatford.

"My youngest graduated high school last June and went fishing right off the b-a-t," she says. "That was what he always wanted to do, fish with his brothers. Bobby's older brother, Rick, used to fish the Andrea Gail years ago."

She draws a draft beer for a customer and continues. "The Andrea Gail crew left from this bar. They were all standing over there by the pool table saying good-bye. About the only thing different that time was that Billy Tyne let them take our color TV on the boat. He said, ‘Ethel, they can take the TV, but if they watch it instead of doing their work, the TV's going overboard.' I said, That's fine, Billy, that's fine.”

That was the last time Shatford ever saw her son. Recently a young guy drifted into town who looked so much like Bobby that people were stopping and staring on the street. He walked into the Crow's Nest, and another bartender felt it necessary to explain to him why everyone was looking at him. "He went over to the picture of Bobby and says, `If I sent that picture to my mother, she'd think it was me.'

Linda Greenlaw still comes into the bar from time to time, between trips, swearing that some day she's going to "meet the right guy and retire to a small island in Maine." Bob Brown settled out of court with several of the dead crewmembers' families after two years of legal wrangles. Adam Randall, the man who had stepped off the Andrea Gail at the last minute, went on to crew with Albert Johnston on the Mary T . When he found out that the Andrea Gail had sunk in the storm, all he could say was, "I was supposed to have been on that boat. That was supposed to have been me."

During the spring of 1993 the Mary T was hauled out for repairs, and Randall picked up work on a tuna longliner, the Terri Lei, out of Georgetown, South Carolina. On the evening of April 6, 1993, the crew of the Terri Lei set lines. In the early morning, there were reports of gusty winds and extremely choppy seas in the area. At 8:45 A.M. the Coast Guard in Charleston, South Carolina, picked up an EPIRB signal and sent out two aircraft and a cutter to investigate. By then the weather was fair and the seas were moderate. One hundred and thirty-five miles off the coast, they found the EPIRB, some fishing gear, and a self-inflating life raft. The raft had the name Terri Lei stenciled on it. There was no one on board.To me, the decision to bookend the story with Randall — the man who got away, but then didn’t — is audacious. Why’d you do it?To me, it was just really chilling, that he had escaped fate once, but maybe you can never really escape fate. It just gave me a little shiver. Also, I felt like it was a reminder to people how dangerous this job is, and that you’re never safe. It seemed like an ending that would reverberate.

Elon Green is a contributor to Longform.org and The Awl, and has written Annotation Tuesday! installments with Amy Wallace and Leslie Jamison. For the full Annotation Tuesday! archive, go here. Follow Green at @elongreen.