Alexandra,
Please remember that you have every opportunity to improve your Mueller Report grade by working through the revision process. There are some wonderful positives from your piece:
Places in which you can improve:
You really tackled a great deal here. This piece is complex and LONG! I appreciate that you gave it a go, just be more deliberate about the parts you want to really develop.
Please let me know when we can conference about this and consider getting some peer feedback, because your classmates are your audience. I look forward to seeing this piece again — remember that revisions are an important part of the writing process!
Good job,
Ms Hager
